This mini lesson will focus on how to teach students to correct FRAGMENTS. Often times students will write an incomplete sentence and it will cause confusion to the reader and disrupt the flow of the paragraph. Mini lesson #3 will give you ideas to help students avoid writing in fragments. If you missed the last writing lesson on subjects and predicates, click COMPLETE SENTENCES!
Is the incomplete sentence missing a subject? Shopping for a car. Make it complete: My dad was shopping for a car.
Is the incomplete sentence missing a predicate? A lawn service. Make it complete: A lawn service came to trim our bushes.
2. TAKE NOTES: To help students understand the meaning of a fragment, take notes in a writing notebook. This will be a great reference to remind students of the skill in the future. Students should take notes and write examples. I like to have students take notes using INTERACTIVE WRITING NOTEBOOKS. Research supports the use of interactive writing notebooks through studies on multiple intelligence, note-taking, and the brain! Here are a few videos about SETTING UP INTERACTIVE WRITING NOTEBOOKS.
3. GROUP OR PARTNER WORK: Have students practice correcting fragments by creating 5 fragments and exchanging it with a shoulder partner. Their shoulder partner then makes them complete sentences! When students complete this task, they should share their samples with a small group or the whole group.
4. SHARE: Share some of the student-made fragments and corrections with the class.
5. INDEPENDENT PRACTICE: Provide some sort of independent practice to see if each student understands fragments and complete sentences. Either provide fragments for students to put into complete sentences or provide fragments and complete sentences and have students identify them. Task cards are a good way for practicing in centers. You are welcome to use the fragment samples found below when creating practice for your class.
6. APPLY: Students should now apply their knowledge by writing in complete sentences. Give them a topic or prompt to write about in their writing notebooks. Tell them to underline the subject and circle the predicate in each sentence like the previous lesson to assure they do not have fragments in their paragraph!
7. INDEPENDENT ASSESSMENT: Once you think your students had enough practice, give them an independent assessment and track their progress. This useful information can be used with forming small instructional groups or end of year review.
I hope this helps you in your classroom!
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